Feedback on Final Cut

Can you describe what happens in our thriller?
- kidnap
- a forced date with girl
- torture
- stalker with scrap book

Would you be interested in watching the rest of the film?
- yes if it had less transitions
- Not based on this!

Do you think the tile sequence fits i with the thriller genre, including micro-elements?
- Not particularly, some enigmas, e.g. book
- sort of when the blind fold is used etc.
- not particularly with genre but connections to scrap book
- i like the idea of the names on the pages

Did you enjoy the thriller, what would you change about it?
- the music doesn't create a scary atmosphere
- less transitions
- fix the size of the transitions
- Less of the book, more shots of the field

Which shot would you remove and why?
- less of car and book

What did you think about our editing, what would you improve?
- editing and cuts were good, no need to improve.
- letterbox the footage.

Voice-over poem (sound)

We started off just as friends,
As time went by it felt like more.
This was a love, no limits, no end,
Ever since you walked through my door.
If only you knew how much I loved you,
The things i would have done,
just to hear you say- I love you too.
You were the only one
Why did you have to be so blind?
How could you not have seen me?
The games you played with my mind.
I can't stand knowing we will never be.

I would have done anything.
You were my everything.

(sam will be the voice of the girl saying the poem).