response to feedback

feedback: its just a book
response: the story is about whats in the book

feedback: each shot mores on overtime
response: the shots haven't been cut yet

feedback: made clearer - character wise etc
response: the stalkers identity needs to be secret

feedback: doesn't show the darker side
response: there could be more shots that explain the obsession

feedback: not really a setting
response: there are shots of a setting that haven't been put in yet


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