FeedBack:

Editing:
good editing towards the end, makes it dramatic.
Good build up using editing.
The dark room style is good as well as zooming.

Camera Work
Shaky, could have used a tripod, middle looked good as it creates confusion :)

Sound Suggestions
Basic noise of page turning.
When lights fade go to ominous and tense music.

Mise en Sence
Not really a setting at first, no action.
got potential though.

Narrative
Its just a book, probally each shot works on overtime.
Lack of narrative, but it still makes sence.

Generic Conventions
stalker, mystery, death and threat

Other Feedback
- more build up
- less repetition of same footage
- make clearer (characters)
- make sure editing runs smoothly