Feedback on Final Cut

Can you describe what happens in our thriller?
- kidnap
- a forced date with girl
- torture
- stalker with scrap book

Would you be interested in watching the rest of the film?
- yes if it had less transitions
- Not based on this!

Do you think the tile sequence fits i with the thriller genre, including micro-elements?
- Not particularly, some enigmas, e.g. book
- sort of when the blind fold is used etc.
- not particularly with genre but connections to scrap book
- i like the idea of the names on the pages

Did you enjoy the thriller, what would you change about it?
- the music doesn't create a scary atmosphere
- less transitions
- fix the size of the transitions
- Less of the book, more shots of the field

Which shot would you remove and why?
- less of car and book

What did you think about our editing, what would you improve?
- editing and cuts were good, no need to improve.
- letterbox the footage.