Further Feedback

How effectively edited is this thriller, give an example of a section of effective editing/ a single cut/ effect that you like and why?;

-Very effective, good fading.
-The titles were slick.
-The bit at the end when the boy was gagged was good - confusing.
-Fading book into trees was good.

Discuss the useof sound in this thriller, both diegetic and non-diegetic. What emotions does it invoke and how effective is it?
- one transition needs improving, (small to big square near end)
-needs some deigetic sound
- flicking lights at end caused tension.
- music upbeat so you stay interested
- when music fits with lights the flashing was effective.

What wrds would you use to describe the visual style?
-creepy
-kind of girly
-i like the shot over table at end
-gag scene
-liked the book idea
-perhaps add more shots of the crazy side of stalker character.

Highlight atleast three things that you think are good about the thriller, and two areas for development of how things could have been done differently.
- gag scene was good- didn't make sense though.
-good transitions
-titles maybe need improving.